I’ve been called the Angel of Death,
but I am no angel – just Lucy, a failed science experiment. Since the day I was
released I have clung to the night for its protection, it’s warmth. To avoid
the looks of people who can’t understand. The night has taken care of me and
I’ve sworn to return the favour.
Tonight I sit upon the highest
building in the city, watching the odd red and white car lights flicker like
gems through the web of streets. The weather is warm, the stars in full force,
a mirror of the streetlights below. The moon is full; my strange shadow keeps
me company.
A sharp scream echoes from one of
the alleyways twenty stories below and I sigh. Lovely weather always brings the
loonies out to play. Scanning the dark side-street with sharp eyes, I see
movement and focus my aim. Then I jump.
As I fall, two great black wings
stretch out from between my shoulder blades, a fourteen-foot wingspan of inky
feathers that look like satin in the moonlight. The effect of human-animal
genome splicing, these wings are my burden and my blessing. I accept what I am.
I blink jet black eyes to refocus on
my target. I see him now, running towards the busy main road, a woman’s purse
tight in his hands. I have to catch him before he hits the street or he’ll be
lost to the real world, away from the shadows that hide me. I beat my wings,
twice, three times, the gust of each flap scattering waves of dust beneath me.
He’s directly in front of me, almost at his goal.
I let out a shriek and extend
talon-sharp nails. He looks over his shoulder but has no time to scream, to
react. I drop lower and tear into his neck. The purse falls from his hands and
his body slumps.
Without a glance backwards, I beat
my wings once more to return to my perch.
The night belongs to me.
I do what I can to protect it.
WOW. wow wow wow! I really really enjoyed this piece! Make this creature a little more human, and write it into a novel. Meanwhile, you better damn well submit it as is to Bleeding Ink! It's so perfect. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat basis for a story. Being a flash it left me wanting more... always a good sign.
ReplyDeleteI wanted to know 'what next' obviously, but also more about her motivations, her background, *why* she exists etc. I'm intrigued...
No disrespect to Tammy above, although she is always free to disrespect me as much as she wants, because it's fun, but I was drawn to the alien-ness of the character. The writing world is full of vampires which are humans with pointy teeth, and aliens which are humans in rubber suits, but this character had an element of the 'bird' in her makeup... the cold hunter's attitude came out really well, even in those few words. The conflicts this generates as she tries to find allies in a human world would make it an interesting, tense read... just a thought.
Great job.